यह एक “शेव्ड” है न कि शेव्ड चूत……….. पी. कृपया लिखना सीखें पी[roperly
Anonymous readerReport
2009-11-06 11:42:36
Crappy writing …..is english a second language to you??
Agree with the first comment…who caught you? But this story is poorly written….evidently from a boy younger than 24….if you’re older…go back and finish high school!
Anonymous readerReport
2009-11-06 07:43:49
The story line is good, but, the writing is terrible.
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Anonymous readerReport
Agree with the first comment…who caught you? But this story is poorly written….evidently from a boy younger than 24….if you’re older…go back and finish high school!
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